This would've been a good story if it weren't for the graphic sexual content, the numerous grammatical errors and the struggling plot. From the first page I cringed as I read but decided to keep going because of the plot. I don't know if this made sense. Where was the cohesiveness in the story and the end just dropped off unexpantantly. I had to go back some pages to make sure I hadn't skipped a chapter or two. I am giving the story 3 stars because it had promise and wasn't completely unenjoyable.